Evaluation Question: 1

First Film Cut

This is our first film cut.

Feedback Of Film - 5

From this feedback from Lucina and Katie, saying that at the minute, our film is at a reasonable standard, and that the aspects of the film are P and Es, however will we still need to improve the aspects to the film that are Ps, as they aren't at the top band, and so will need to improve those, such as the genre relating to target audience.

Feedback For Film - 4

From this feedback, i can see that the lighting for our film was good despite it being hard to film in the dark, and the camera quality was good considering the dark and also the sound was scary and rose tension however at the start we came across a solution to the grave saying fred, and changing the film to Fred, however since we filmed it, the movie title changed, and as the sister said 'bye jack' it defeats the object of Fred as she was calling him Jack, so we will have to change that.

Feedback Of Film - 3

From this feedback, i can see that we got P and E in all subjects surrounding our film aspects so that suggests that our film is at a good standard at the minute, however we will still improve the bits we have got Ps in as they aren't at the top marks yet, such as producing appropriate genre for target audience.

Feedback Of Film - 2

From this feedback i can see that the dark lighting that we have used in our film is scary and was effective, however the B we got in our titles suggests we need to improve on a titles, which we will do to make it scarier.

Feedback Of Film - 1

This is feedback about a film from James, as from his comments we have good editing however we need to improve sound quality, I've asked him further, and he says the baby sound needs to be a bit more creepier and realistic, however the E and Ps from him suggests that our movie is at a goos standard at the minute.